i never said i knew you better than you know yourself, katie

shut up matt, you are the ass not katie, you have no idea what she goes through every day. you are a pathetic little worm begging for attention because your sorry love life sucks right now. get over it, you like her, she doesnt like you.


shollow asshole

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while critique is most certainly welcome, mister whisper, i would like to add that you have no idea what i go through every day, or who i am. youll also note i never once called katie an "ass" and ud get that if u read the poem more solidly instead of totally doing whatever she said. also try and understand im not begging for attention, this is just self expression and no one forced you against the wall to read it. bla bla bla insults, no one has a "love life" people just have "relationships" and mines going ok like ud have any idea how i actually felt about katie. also id like to get over it, but as it says in the poem, i cant. and im entitled to like her, im not forcing her to like me and i never did. i can get over it or i can choose not to, thats not for you to decide. by the way this poem was written after shed invited my best friend to some party by lying and sayin i was going just to get him to go, she called me by my last name as if she barely knew me. that just hurt a little, and i wrote about it. go figure. your opinion is taken but next time try to understand whats written, or at least comment on the actual poem.

and i am most definitly not shallow

* more critique is welcome, bring it on whisper, you toothless stranger bastard, you

there's a lot of truth in this

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thanks

wow, thats really good. ka-fave

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thanks!

love it matt, stright up love it... and Mr.Whisper, Matt is entitled to his own opinion, thats the beauty of writing and the U.S. if u have a problem with it... shove it. luv ya panty, keep writing!

a. you dont know me
b. as everyone is entitled to their oppinion, so am i, there fore, by your own logic, i can say wahtever i wans to matt
c. matt and i are friends (sorta) now, so you shove it

as our beloved president himself said. "bring it on"

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Oh, I'd be friends with the sparrows and the boy who shoots the arrows...

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